Hello and Happy Poetry Friday! Be sure to visit our resident Aussie Kat at Kathryn Apel for Roundup.
I've been thinking a lot lately about what's going on under our feet. Two books in particular have gotten me there: THE NATURALIST by E.O. Wilson and THE HIDDEN LIFE OF TREES by Peter Wohlleben.
E.O. Wilson's life's work has been the discovery and cataloguing of ants. A number of ant species' are subterranean, so one has to dig to find them.
And trees, well, trees are talking to each other underground, in their oh-so-slow with-the-help-of-fungi way. I learned about it in THE HIDDEN LIFE OF TREES. Here is a fabulous podcast interview with the author for the audio-inclined. (Thank you, April!)
And what does this have to do with poetry? Well, Jane Yolen's THUNDER UNDERGROUND (brought to us by WordSong, with illus. by Josee Masse) includes 21 poems on what's happening down there! And the back cover poses the delicious question in the subject line of this post: What's the SOUND underground? (Which reminds me of a post I wrote from a few years back about sound and poetry.)
Here is a favorite poem from the collection:
Seeds
This dot,
this spot,
this period at the end
of winter's sentence
writes its way up
through the dull slate of soil
into the paragraph of spring.
- Jane Yolen
Great metaphor, isn't it?
It got me thinking: are there other "punctuation" poems? And then I had to laugh, because indeed, there are three of them in FRESH DELICIOUS! Squash varieties as question mark, exclamation mark, and period. Ha!
So, poets... do YOU have any punctuation poems? Please share!
Hmmm... Not sure if 'The Musings of Maxim, Edit-err' qualifies - but off the top of my head, I think it may be the closest thing I've got?
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I've spotted my stakes
and dotted my tees,
crossed my eyes
and queued my peas.
I’ve cut and confuddled
confounding clichés
but I’m dashed if I know
how to turn a phrase.
I love Jane's seed poem. Just gorgeous! And that's us, today. Spring has sprung in Australia!
Yoiks! Not sure what happened to the last line of that poem... That's perhaps taking the wordplay a bit too far, thank-you blogspot comment box. :P
DeleteWe are on the same wavelength today, Irene. (Communicating underground?) The Hidden Life of Trees has been on my radar, but I didn't know about this podcast, so thank you for the link. Jane Yolen is so brilliant. Of course a seed is the "period at the end/of winter's sentence!"
ReplyDeleteI have The Hidden Life of Trees on my list, hope to read it someday! Thanks for the link to the author, Irene. I just read a bit in another children's nf book about plants communicating their needs to others in the roots, amazing! Jane's poem is a lovely thought, that "writes its way up". Thanks for all, Irene, and I love your "squash punctuation."
ReplyDeleteAlas I can think of no punctuation poems, but I have a punctuation joke!
ReplyDeleteWhat’s the difference between a cat and a comma? One has claws at the end of its paws and the other is a pause at the end of a clause.
:-D
Guess what is on my night table right now? The Hidden Life of Trees! It is pretty fascinating (usually I save the nonfiction for my insomniac bouts, but this one does not instantly put me to sleep...high praise!) "the period at the end of winter's sentence" = perfection!
ReplyDeleteThunder Underground looks great! I need to check that one out. Hmmmmmmm punctuation poems. I don't believe I have any. But, I do love a poem challenge prompt. Consider it a work in progress. Wonderful post today. So much to think about.
ReplyDeleteThis is the second time today I've run across The Hidden Life of Trees, so into my Audible wish list it has gone. While there, I found (in the "if you liked this, then this") two books about birds by Bernd Heinrich.
ReplyDeleteLove how your adult reading led to a poetry book review let to punctuation poems! Doesn't look like I have any...I'll have to fix that!
Thanks for sharing these books and one of Jane's poems. I've yet to write a punctuation poem, but it sounds fun!
ReplyDeleteMy husband is a forester, so I think I will have to get him a copy of the Hidden Life of Trees so I can read it. I LOVE Jane's seed poem. I don't have any punctuation poems, but it sounds like a challenge to take up!
ReplyDeleteHmmm... no, I haven't written any punctuation poems... yet. But your post does bring to mind Amy Krause Rosenthal's picture book titled "!" (Exclamation Mark) I'm guessing you've probably read it, but if you haven't, You should. Thank you for reminding me about THUNDER UNDERGROUND. It's one I've been meaning to check out for some time now. Jane sure does have a magical way with metaphor.
ReplyDeleteHere is one, off the cuff:
ReplyDeleteWhy do semi-colons
make so many guts churn;
turning learn into yearn; and
seem like stoplights dripping red?
(Without it, this poem would be dead.)
Just make the colon a list
with a semi-colon twist.
I do love THUNDER UNDERGROUND. Jane Yolen is a master.
What a rich and inspiring post Irene, nature circling all around. Here's a Fall punctuated poem:
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The winds have
shifted,
the commas
undone–
the leaves are
falling
the dash’s
on the run …
the air is
cooler
and marks
a question,
will fall come
slowly?
or plow into
period quite unholy.
Michelle Kogan
Thanks for this full to the brim post, happy Fall!
Can't wait to read Jane's new book. She's a whirlwind of words and they all fall in the perfect spot.
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