tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375684657483536810.post9085304568673904279..comments2024-03-24T11:00:49.738-05:00Comments on Live Your Poem...: ARTSPEAK! Portraits poem "Dark the Day"Irene Lathamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375684657483536810.post-14195679981532283402017-04-24T06:14:55.021-05:002017-04-24T06:14:55.021-05:00I read this poem and thought of a child having to ...I read this poem and thought of a child having to sit through long Sunday services. The repetition works well in this. It sets up the rhyme really nice...like how volleyball players set up a spike.Linda Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00833034575304594924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375684657483536810.post-53758951639939613512017-04-23T13:57:40.048-05:002017-04-23T13:57:40.048-05:00I am learning a lot about reading portraits from y...I am learning a lot about reading portraits from you, Irene.<br />And so empathetic, that you see Henri's "Little Dutch Girl" wants to romp in the fresh air. LOVE your poem.jan godown anninohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00091996699597066230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375684657483536810.post-5115284884285677282017-04-23T07:38:42.898-05:002017-04-23T07:38:42.898-05:00She does seem a bit disgruntled. Perhaps her mothe...She does seem a bit disgruntled. Perhaps her mother made her sit for a personal portrait? Yes, I sing "Row, row, row your boat" with the grand-girls, so recognized that rhythm. It fits beautifully with her boredom, doesn't it? Fun this time, Irene. Have a lovely Sunday!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com