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This week's ArtSpeak: PICASSO is on the subject of music—No doubt because I attended my annual adult strings weekend last weekend. :)
The power of music has been well documented. I love how music connects us—and as a musician in an ensemble, I love how every musician matters, yet we are at our best when we are indistinguishable from one another. The whole goal is one-ness. Which means letting go of ego, disappearing into the beautiful ether. Lovely, yes? Thanks so much for reading!Music Theory
we are in pieces
our bodies
harbor oceans
music bleeds
through our skin
like starlight
each note
cleaving us
together apart
together again
- Irene Latham
Irene, the concept of togetherness-one-ness. Your poem is so well structured with beautiful thoughts and format that the togetherness theme flows through. each note
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together apart
together again
It is so important in this time frame to become a living part of a community without continually standing in the limelight. I am happy to know that your music group gives you peace and happiness.
"our bodies/harbor oceans" is magical.
ReplyDeleteOh, this is lovely - I really like the cleaving us/ together/apart/together again. I adore a good contronym, and what a fun use of it here to echo the way harmony divides our water metaphor into tributaries then back to the main body of the ocean. Music theory, water cycle, what DIDN'T you cover here!?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful metaphors one weaving into the next rising, falling , and rising again, as music does too, thanks for sharing, and congrats on your strings weekend!
ReplyDeleteWow - what a great capture of the ensemble experience, Irene! Not that I've been in one (maybe in 8th grade), but I am so delighted you have had the discipline and passion to keep up with your cello. Kudos to you! xo
ReplyDelete"Our bodies/harbor oceans" -- sigh. I also love the movement and rhythm that are evoked through:
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cleaving us
together apart
together again
Fabulous!
Irene, lovely importance of the way musicians work together to make one ensemble. And that contronym cleave is perfect in these last lines:
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together apart
together again
A beautiful tribute to the musical ensemble, Irene! Love that internal structure at the end.
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