Friday, July 22, 2011

OH TINY LIVING LIGHTNING

Today I am writing a poem about a hummingbird.

Turns out, hummingbirds have often been an source of inspiration to poets -- from Emily Dickinson to Robert Frost to Mary Oliver. Not to mention the lovely HUMMINGBIRD NEST by Kristine O'Connell George. Which makes it a daunting subject to tackle. I mean, what can I possibly say that hasn't already been said?

Instead of being intimidated, I choose to be inspired. Especially when I read this one by Pablo Neruda:

Ode to the Hummingbird

The hummingbird
in flight
is a water-spark,
an incandescent drip
of American
fire,
the jungle's
flaming resume,
a heavenly,
precise
rainbow:
the hummingbird is
an arc,
a golden
thread,
a green
bonfire!

Oh
tiny
living
lightning,
when
you hover
in the air,
you are
a body of pollen,
a feather
or hot coal,
I ask you:
What is your substance?
Perhaps during the blind age
of the Deluge,
within fertility's
mud,
when the rose
crystallized
in an anthracite fist,
and metals matriculated
each one in
a secret gallery
perhaps then
from a wounded reptile
some fragment rolled,
a golden atom,
the last cosmic scale,
a drop of terrestrial fire
took flight,
suspending your splendor,
your iridescent,
swift sapphire.

You doze
on a nut,
fit into a diminutive blossom;
you are an arrow,
a pattern,
a coat-of-arms,
honey's vibrato, pollen's ray;
you are so stouthearted--
the falcon
with his black plumage
does not daunt you:
you pirouette,
a light within the light,
air within the air.
Wrapped in your wings,
you penetrate the sheath
of a quivering flower,
not fearing
that her nuptial honey
may take off your head!

From scarlet to dusty gold,
to yellow flames,
to the rare
ashen emerald,
to the orange and black velvet
of our girdle gilded by sunflowers,
to the sketch
like
amber thorns,
your Epiphany,
little supreme being,
you are a miracle,
shimmering
from torrid California
to Patagonia's whistling,
bitter wind.
You are a sun-seed,
plumed
fire,
a miniature
flag
in flight,
a petal of silenced nations,
a syllable
of buried blood,
a feather
of an ancient heart,
submerged

For more poetic inspiration, visit Tabatha at The Opposite of Indifference. I'll be at my window, watching and writing.

5 comments:

  1. Amazing poem, Irene! Thanks for sharing it. Hope your writing goes well today :-)

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  2. Ahhh, gorgeous. Love that "incandescent drip of American fire." They are amazing creatures. If you don't have it, you might enjoy Jeanette Larson's HUMMINGBIRDS: FACTS AND FOLKLORE FROM THE AMERICAS, with quilted illustrations by Adrienne Yorinks, out earlier this year from Charlesbridge.

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  3. Tiny Living Lightning indeed - how very beautiful. And to be inspired by the beauty that surrounds us - that's a gift. Seeing the familiar with strange eyes. I love it. =) Thanks for sharing.

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  4. "the jungle's
    flaming resume,"

    Wow. You really pick some lofty inspirations! Share with us what you come up with?

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  5. on my back deck the land on the feeder and rest with wings folded. They trust that no harm will come to them. I always know when a new one feeds... they hover. I've not earned their trust.

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